The poem has a lot to say and says it well but perhaps lacks a little in spontaneity. The inner vision seems to pass into expression through the thinking mind  effectively but not always illuminatingly.

Amal

I think it is a fine poem, feelingly conveying to us the new way your eyes Look at the world and at yourself.

Amal

Dear Narad,

Thank you for your fine letter. Surely you do not need to be so humble about your poetic output. There is a lot of input in your work from the spiritual point of view.

Amal

Very felicitous all through. I liked especially the third stanza.

Amal